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In Canterlot our episode does begin,

With Rarity choosing to do better than an inn.

To stay the in castle the princess kindly offers,

It's not like it'll be a large dent in her coffers.

Rarity thanks her and goes into the town,

And gets an idea to make Twilight a gown.

She then meets Jet Set and his wife Upper Crust,

But when they find where she's from they leave in disgust.

Rarity can't forget what the pair of them thought,

So she creates something worthy of Canterlot!

She draws up her plans and heads out for supplies,

Before bumping into another, much to her surprise.

She's run into Fancypants and his wife, Fleur De Lis,

And she starts collecting the scattered parts for her piece.

She apologizes for the bump and the hassle,

She was just trying to hurry back to the castle.

Her residence catches Fancypants' attention,

And he invites her to a racing convention.

She agrees and arrives for the races,

Prompting shocked looks on two stuck-up faces.

She goes against Fancypants and comes home with the prize,

But when asked about her knowledge she decides to tell lies.

Many more invitations the ponies then bestow,

While she declares she's a pony that everypony should know.

With her high-class life she makes much progress,

But she soon finds herself without Twilight's dress.

She plans to go home and finish the clothes,

As she finds an invitation with elegant prose.

Between high society and her friends she must pick,

Causing her to write home that poor Opal is sick.

She dolls herself up and gets ready to leave,

When her friends appear and give her new reason to grieve.

They greet her with a welcome most hearty,

And Pinkie with her cannon soon set up a party.

They go to the ballroom to hold Twi's birthday,

And looking out the window Rarity sees croquet.

Her other event is outside through the glass,

And she's afraid of being seen by all the top brass.

They get the party started and while it is roaring,

Rarity shows up at the one far more boring.

She tries to split time equally with the two,

But she is discovered when a mallet she does chew.

Twilight says they'll go and be with the high class,

And the noble ponies they begin to harass.

Fancypants talks to Twilight who is dancing quite mad,

Imploring of the origins of the dress she had clad.

Twilight starts to answer and Rarity is afraid,

With the truth coming out; it's a dress that she made.

Fancypants then asks if this is at all true,

And her care for her friends finally shines through.

The higher up ponies then snicker and sneer,

While to old chivalry Fancypants does adhere.

He says that he finds her dress rather fine,

And to get one for the Gala they need to form a line.

He shows the other ponies that he is their better,

While the princess shows up, nullifying  the letter.

Rarity then tells her the lesson that she's learned,

And the bellhop pony feels like he's been spurned.
While writing this one was no easy feat,

I give you this rhyme, one for Sweet and Elite!
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QuinnFiberoptic Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
You are amazing!
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coolkid82829 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Writer
Why has this more publicity than my work? Its time, for spam submitting!
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MrSpartin Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I voted for this one. Love it.
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dereckc1 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Another great one Zecora.
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Sammyatro Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poems always make me feel merry,

especially your wide range of vocabulary!

My vocabulary has certainly grown,

and your poems inspire me to make my own!
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Rhyming-Zecora Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Thank you very much, Sammyatro,

It's always good for vocab to grow!

I look forward to seeing more of your rhyming work,

And from my own rhyming duties I certainly won't shirk!
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Awesomesaucical Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dang....
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